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When it comes
« on: March 28, 2009, 10:42:35 PM »
Make me feel it.
Rub midnight in the wounds
given to me by god
by my mother and her mother.

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Re: When it comes
« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2012, 06:55:55 AM »
Make me feel it.
Rub midnight in the wounds
given to me by god
by my mother and her mother.

It brings thorns upon my heart
just when I think about it
What else is in store for me O God?
Do not replicate it further


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Re: When it comes
« Reply #2 on: December 09, 2012, 11:31:33 PM »
Make me feel it.
Rub midnight in the wounds
given to me by god
by my mother and her mother.

It brings thorns upon my heart
just when I think about it
What else is in store for me O God?
Do not replicate it further

Make it end with me, I shout
Alone beneath a trillion suns
Beneath the babble of starshine
Remote and unfeeling