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Country Retreat
« on: June 06, 2010, 07:24:42 AM »

Quietly I sit
catching the heavy warmth of
the last desert sigh


I lift my low gaze
above surging yellow waves
channelled husky wheat


Squinting I can see
the horizon’s glazed mirror
dance into the light


A mallee tree sways
as a pink and grey sweeps
dusty pockets


In watchful silence
the bush beyond savours
this fleeting moment


(C) TJaw (Published 2010)
« Last Edit: June 06, 2010, 07:28:04 AM by TMK »

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Re: Country Retreat
« Reply #1 on: June 06, 2010, 05:08:26 PM »
I enjoyed this very much. The language you are using is outstanding.