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Post your slam poetry
« on: April 24, 2010, 11:24:11 PM »
If they are good, I will consider them the for post your poetry and win contest.

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Re: Post your slam poetry
« Reply #1 on: November 18, 2011, 09:16:29 AM »
A stinging blow
a hurting in space
he who thinks he holds justice, standing in my face
seeing red as the world goes black
unconcious calls, a slack as the world goes black

Waking up as the sun goes down, a punding in my head
like the military firing off a round

Dried blood on my lip,
a gash to my hip
and my heart, missing another chip..

people would never think he would break down me
i was always the strong one you see

fighting for my life
fighting for the last breath at night
fighting for my right
yet its all gone, you lost this night

but i am strong
ill put the mask back on
ill fight till this hellish night is gone

but one day ill be the bee
ill sting back you see
you wont see me coming
you wont see me leave
ill do like you...
ill sting then ill leave

ill be there when your dead ill be there when your gone
never again will you fuck with me like you did for so long

ill pop my collar and ill drive away
adios pops..
im outta here today......

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Re: Post your slam poetry
« Reply #2 on: December 29, 2011, 07:15:20 AM »
Very cool. I liked this.

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Re: Post your slam poetry
« Reply #3 on: November 03, 2012, 02:31:59 AM »
Does anyone see? Does anyone care?
Do you know it’s me that is standing there?
You said you loved, that you wanted to share,
I was precious and you wanted me there.
When I was crying, where were you?
You needed time to think sh*t through.

Do you think I’m standing too near
enough for you to realize the fear
of what being my friend really could mean?
I’d thought you were wise enough to have foreseen

Should I be surprised? Is this just my lot?
It seems when I try to help it’s forgot.
Effort is weak, only results matter,
as I watch my hopes fall and shatter.
I dared to dream I’d be enough
stupid little girl, you aren’t that tough.

Indeed you think I’m standing too near,
but you would never voice feeling the fear
of what being my friend really could mean.
Yeah, I can tell you’re done with this scene.

Well I am Me and ever shall be,
I won’t let you break my heart ’cause see
what gives me passion, gives me life,
is knowing I have Me in times of strife.
So run away, if you feel the need.
Throw up as many obstacles to impede
my perceived pursuit to cross your lines
or any other imagined crimes.

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Re: Post your slam poetry
« Reply #4 on: November 24, 2012, 08:46:36 PM »
time flies, I like this one a lot. I the run, but post more and I'll give more detailed comments.