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April, 2006
« on: May 02, 2010, 03:51:27 PM »
Dark blue moments of
watching a feeling that I knew you,
distilling my fear from your smell –
attic on an August day.

a series of epiphanies:
the puzzle-piece fingers
laughter, the heady sound of rivers.

I became my breath, all air
our molecules drew water.

© B. L. Goss 2010
www.blgoss.com

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Re: April, 2006
« Reply #1 on: May 02, 2010, 03:55:56 PM »
This is awesome. I like this very much. This:

Dark blue moments of
watching a feeling that I knew you,
distilling my fear from your smell –
attic on an August day.

is outstanding. Thanks a lot for posting this!

blgoss

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Re: April, 2006
« Reply #2 on: May 02, 2010, 04:02:17 PM »
Thank you for the feedback!