{"id":65934,"date":"2025-02-18T19:08:20","date_gmt":"2025-02-18T19:08:20","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.everywritersresource.com\/shortstories\/?p=65934"},"modified":"2025-02-18T19:08:20","modified_gmt":"2025-02-18T19:08:20","slug":"that-look-by-neil-brosnan","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.everywritersresource.com\/shortstories\/that-look-by-neil-brosnan\/","title":{"rendered":"That Look by Neil Brosnan"},"content":{"rendered":"<h1><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-65936\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.everywritersresource.com\/shortstories\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/02\/That.jpg?resize=640%2C360&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"that look a short story\" width=\"640\" height=\"360\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.everywritersresource.com\/shortstories\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/02\/That.jpg?w=1600&amp;ssl=1 1600w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.everywritersresource.com\/shortstories\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/02\/That.jpg?resize=300%2C169&amp;ssl=1 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.everywritersresource.com\/shortstories\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/02\/That.jpg?resize=1024%2C576&amp;ssl=1 1024w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.everywritersresource.com\/shortstories\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/02\/That.jpg?resize=768%2C432&amp;ssl=1 768w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.everywritersresource.com\/shortstories\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/02\/That.jpg?resize=1536%2C864&amp;ssl=1 1536w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.everywritersresource.com\/shortstories\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/02\/That.jpg?w=1280&amp;ssl=1 1280w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 640px) 100vw, 640px\" \/><\/h1>\n<h1 style=\"text-align: center;\">That Look<\/h1>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">by Neil Brosnan<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: left;\">\u2026 <span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"><i>but Sunday night, I get a fright, when I think of Monday morning.<\/i><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Although his grandfather\u2019s old rhyme had little resonance during Justin\u2019s school days, his transition from college student to company employee has been his steepest learning curve yet. The job, however, is not the problem; Justin\u2019s Sunday night panic attacks are due totally to his virtual ostracism by the firm\u2019s inner-circle: Marcus, Shane and Darren \u2013 the self-styled three amigos. It started on day one, eight months ago, and has been going from bad to worse ever since. Justin has no idea what he has done to deserve their snide remarks, insidious innuendo, and covert bullying. He has tried to be a good colleague: he is competent, conscientious and cooperative, and he believes that he has much more to contribute if allowed to perform to his full potential. To date, he has been limited to the more menial tasks: the shitty stuff no one else wants to do \u2013 and there is a lot of stuff which nobody wants to do. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Are the amigos jealous of Justin\u2019s greater academic achievements; do they fear he might leapfrog them in the office pecking order? Justin has dismissed such thoughts: promotion depends on the boss, and his attitude suggests that Justin would be the first thing he would want to scrape from the sole of his shoe. Neither does the deputy manager inspire optimism; while ensuring that the boss\u2019s in-tray is sufficiently up-to-date to keep the Head Office bean counters at bay,<\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"><i> Dep<\/i><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u2013 as the amigos refer to him \u2013 observes a strict <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"><i>see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil <\/i><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\">policy. Dep does occasionally raise his eyes from his work, but with the air of someone who suspects that something may have happened, but neither knows nor cares what it might be.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Liz, who joined the staff about six weeks ago, is Justin\u2019s only ally, but her support has come at great personal cost. With stage-whispered references to <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"><i>Justine<\/i><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> and <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"><i>Lezzie<\/i><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\">, the three amigos swap jokes about ladyboys and lesbians whenever either Justin or Liz is within earshot. The amigos then up the ante at the slightest interaction between the outcasts, with a practiced routine of barely audible grunts and groans, interspersed with suggestive slurping sounds and exaggerated high-fives.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> This Monday begins as usual, with Justin and Liz arriving at the office almost simultaneously, shortly after the deputy manager, but more than ten minutes ahead of signing-on time. While Justin deals with an early telephone query, Liz sorts and then allots the morning mail to its various departments \u2013 except any items bearing the boss\u2019s name, which she ferries to his inner office. The other staff members \u2013 the three amigos and five ladies \u2013 trickle in over the next fifteen minutes, sipping coffee from take-away cups, or water from plastic bottles. The new arrivals split into two groups: one forms a little gossiping huddle by the office notice board, while the smokers gather in the tiny yard outside the open fire exit door.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> At ten o\u2019clock, Liz unlocks the main door. Justin winces as the glow deepens in her cheeks at each encounter with an amigo on her way back to her desk. Seeing Liz suffer is even more distressing than his personal pain. College does not prepare one for situations like these: such modules have yet to be conceived. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> The boss appears about an hour later: his eyes are red pinholes in a pallid balloon face; his nose, a purple-blue gobbet above a slash of thin bloodless lips. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cMy office \u2013 now,\u201d he barks, rapping his knuckles on Justin\u2019s desk before disappearing inside his inner sanctum.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cYes, Mr\u2026?\u201d Justin begins, knocking politely on the open door.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cShut it!\u201d Unsure as to which <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"><i>it<\/i><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> the boss has referred, Justin silently closes the door. \u201cWell, why are you here?\u201d The boss growls, and then turns his back on Justin to drape the jacket of his suit over the shoulders of his leather swivel chair.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cBut you said\u2026\u201d<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cYou know what I mean; why are you here \u2013 here at work \u2013 today?\u201d<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cI\u2019m sorry, I don\u2019t\u2026\u201d<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p>\u201c<span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\">You are supposed to be on leave; haven\u2019t you seen the notice board? No? Of course you haven\u2019t! You\u2019re due seven days of annual leave, which you must use up before next Monday-week. Because of Easter, you have to take them straight away \u2013 today \u2013 now\u2026 Young <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"><i>Lizzie<\/i><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> can finish whatever you\u2019re working on. Go on\u2026 go!\u201d<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Muttering under his breath, the boss slips his jacket back on and, forcing his bulk past Justin, storms through the main office, and back out to the street. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Justin has been saving those days; he has made plans, but nobody had informed him of the constraints regarding when annual leave must be availed of. A quick calculation tells him that if his holidays were to begin today, he would be due back to work on the Friday after Easter. He checks the office clock and, rather than add to Liz\u2019s workload, decides to remain at his desk until lunchtime. At twelve-forty-five, he delivers his completed projects to Dep\u2019s tray, and then discretely returns the pending files to the desks of those who had foisted them upon him in the first place. Seething within, he enters twelve-fifty next to his signature in the attendance book, and slips quietly from the office.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> On the way to his favourite caf\u00e9, Justin is intercepted by a young woman.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cExcuse me, please,\u201d she says, laying a tentative hand on his arm. He recognises her as the barmaid from the adjacent public house. She takes a nervous drag from her cigarette. \u201cSorry, could you come into the bar for a minute, please? There\u2019s a guy in there; he\u2019s giving me the creeps; I\u2019ll give you free drinks!\u201d Justin has been in the pub only once \u2013 months ago, at a charity table quiz. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cI\u2019m not sure what I can do. I\u2019m\u2026\u201d<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cI understand; I know it\u2019s your lunch break. Ten minutes; just have a coffee; you can have a few pints some other time \u2013 please.\u201d She seems genuinely distraught.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cOkay. Ten minutes, but no more, and don\u2019t expect me to get involved in anything physical \u2013 or even talk to him\u2026\u201d <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> It\u2019s a drinkers\u2019 pub. Everything is brown, but the little round tables and stools are a few shades deeper than that of the floor, ceiling and walls. There are beermats instead of pepper mills and salt cellars, and there isn\u2019t a napkin, or a sachet of mayo, mustard or ketchup in sight. There is only one customer: a shrunken, balding, middle-aged man, seated on a patched leatherette bench at the far end of the room; he is nursing a half-drunk pint of stout and studying a tabloid<\/span><\/span><\/span><i> <\/i><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\">newspaper. Justin takes a seat at the counter, close to the front door, where he has an unhindered view of his subject.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cThanks,\u201d the girl says, with a tight smile. \u201cWould you prefer tea or coffee? Sorry I can\u2019t offer you any proper food; how about a <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"><i>Clubmilk<\/i><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\">, or peanuts or crisps? Look!\u201d She lowers her tone to a hissed whisper, her fingernails biting into his wrist. \u201cSee, he\u2019s staring at me again. Look at his eyes; look!\u201d <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Justin looks, but the man seems focussed on his newspaper. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cI think I\u2019ll have a pint of lager, please.\u201d Justin says, drawing the girl\u2019s gaze from the man. Self-consciously, she releases his wrist. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> The girl\u2019s phone rings as she serves Justin\u2019s drink. Mouthing an apology, she fishes the device from her jeans and, teasing it between shoulder-length waves of blonde hair, presses it to her left ear. Absently, she slips through the door of the keg store. Justin takes a sip from his glass and suddenly understands what had so upset the barmaid. The man is now staring at him, but it\u2019s more than just a stare; it\u2019s a glare \u2013 a black, murderous glare. Justin has a sudden urge to pee, but the man is situated close to toilet door. The man is now writing in his newspaper; he has a short green biro, the sort that usually bears a bookie\u2019s name. Deciding to take a gamble of his own, Justin risks a visit to the toilet, returning the man\u2019s nodded greeting along the way. The man doesn\u2019t react as Justin returns, relieved and unscathed, to resume his vigil. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Intermittent tinkles of laughter sound from the keg store; the barmaid\u2019s spirits have been restored. Taking a good swig from his pint, Justin allows his gaze to return to the man. Biro poised above his newspaper, the man begins to count the fingers of his left hand against its thumb. He takes a sip from his almost empty glass, sighs deeply, and again freezes into that look. This time, however, his eyes are not searing through Justin, or the muted TV screen, or the keg room door but, if looks could kill, the EXIT sign above the front door would have already shone its last. As quickly as it had contorted, the man\u2019s face relaxes into something akin to a smirk of satisfaction. He makes a couple of swift biro strokes on his newspaper, and then folds it and stuffs it inside his nondescript jacket. Rising to his feet, he downs the dregs of his pint, swaps the biro for a hand-rolled cigarette from his top pocket and, with a good natured wave in Justin\u2019s direction, exits the building.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Robbed of a focal point, Justin\u2019s thoughts drift to his enforced sabbatical. He had planned on spending his leave with his parents \u2013 but in early May; not late March. He has been looking forward to helping Mam prepare her flower beds, to sharpening Dad\u2019s tools, to servicing the lawnmower. Little things he had done through his teens, before his move to the city college had deprived his parents of his help, just when they were beginning to need it most. Brenda, Justin\u2019s sister, always comes home for Easter, along with her sons, Trevor and Colin, now aged twelve and ten. It seems to Justin that the boys have recently mutated from trusting toddlers to preteen terrorists. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cIs \u2013 is he gone?\u201d The girl asks as, glancing cautiously around, she makes a timely return from the keg store.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cYes, a few minutes ago; he finished his drink and just left.\u201d Justin drains his glass and gets to his feet.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cHave another, please; if you have the time. I\u2019d love to hear how you did it. By the way, I\u2019m Sandra,\u201d she offers her hand.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cThanks, Sandra; I\u2019m Justin,\u201d he returns her grip with interest. \u201cI\u2019m actually on a few days\u2019 holidays; I have all the time in the world.\u201d He yanks off his tie, stuffs it in his jacket pocket, and opens the top three buttons of his shirt. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cYou remind me of Depp,\u201d she smiles, serving his drink.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cYou mean our deputy manager?\u201d Justin\u2019s burgeoning hopes instantly plunge.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cNo, silly: Johnny Depp; you\u2019ve got his eyes\u2026\u201d <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> There is horseracing on the TV. The pub is suddenly alive with punters; jostling for counter space, calling for drinks, rushing next door to the bookies, encouraging their selections on the screen, questioning the parentage of jockeys, trainers and tipsters, before studying form for the next race. Justin has never placed a bet on a horse \u2013 or anything else \u2013 even in college. He wonders why he is surprised to see some faces familiar from across the office counter among the pub\u2019s clientele.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><a name=\"_GoBack\"><\/a> <span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> A fresh drink appears. Justin tries to catch Sandra\u2019s eye, to thank her, to explain about the staring man. But Sandra is at full tilt: pulling pints, washing glasses, changing kegs, and her spare moments are spent listening to customers\u2019 jokes or exchanging banter with the smokers in the front doorway. Where were they when she needed them? He scowls at the thought. Where were they when she had no one to turn to for help? Yet, they now command her constant attention; it\u2019s as if neither Justin nor the staring man had ever been. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Justin is taken aback by his anger. It must be the drink, he decides, weaving his way to the toilet. He wonders how many pints he has had: at least three; could he have had more than four? He has certainly had more than is advisable on an empty stomach. Drying his hands, he catches a glimpse of his reflection in the washstand mirror. For one riveting instant, <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"><i>he<\/i><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> could have been the staring man. He tries to regain the chilling expression: baring his teeth in a wolfish grin, he tilts his forehead slightly forward, half-closes his eyes and squints through his eyelashes. He can\u2019t hold the look for long; a foolish, lopsided grin keeps getting in the way. The grin becomes a leer as Justin veers through the rear exit and weaves towards the nearest take-away.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Early on Tuesday afternoon, after an unpleasant eighty-minute journey, the bus drops Justin a few minutes\u2019 walk from his parents\u2019 home. Despite still feeling slightly ropey, he allows himself a little silent chortle at each disjointed flashback from his afternoon in the pub: the arousing amalgam of scents when Sandra had clung to his wrist, the many faces of the staring man, and the volatility of the punters\u2019 moods. In a side street caf\u00e9, he washes down a toasted sandwich with a mug of tea, and relives the almost erotic thrill of returning the files to the amigos\u2019 desks.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> His parents\u2019 Ford Focus is alone in the driveway. Justin bypasses the hall door and calls out as he enters the back kitchen.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cHello; it\u2019s me.\u201d There is no response; the only sound is the gentle hum of the extractor fan above the electric cooker. There is a faint aroma of roasting lamb. He goes into the hall, turning towards the stairs in response to a creaking from above. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cStay there, I\u2019m coming down!\u201d Mam calls, somewhat breathlessly. There is another sound\u2026 a sort of stifled snort\u2026 Looking oddly dishevelled, and barefoot beneath her dressing gown, Mam pads into the kitchen. \u201cWhat\u2019s wrong?\u201d she scowls, and then remembers to present her cheek for her son\u2019s customary greeting.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cNothing\u2019s wrong; I thought I\u2019d surprise you, I had\u2026\u201d<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cYou\u2019ve certainly done that. We\u2026 I was upstairs\u2026 getting the place ready for Brenda and the boys. You know they always come for the Easter holidays. I was going to put Trevor in your room\u2026 \u201d<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Justin makes a pot of tea while Mam returns upstairs to get dressed, but it\u2019s Dad who thumps down the stairs a few minutes later.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cWhat are you doing here,\u201d Dad sounds just like Justin\u2019s boss.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cI had some leave coming; I thought it would be a nice surprise, but&#8230;\u201d<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cOh, it is. We love having you visit, Justin, but it would be better if we\u2019d known in advance. You know, with Brenda and the boys here for a whole week\u2026\u201d His eyes dart towards the ceiling.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> The lawnmower is purring sweetly by the time Brenda and the boys arrive. Mam has already assured Justin that Trevor and Colin will share the bunk room, so he need not fret for the safety of his childhood treasures. Justin is still struggling with the image of Trevor dismembering his veteran <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"><i>Action Man<\/i><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> when a football whizzes past his ear and crashes into the gardening tools he has just arranged on the garage wall. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cCome on; we\u2019ll give you a game.\u201d Trevor shouts from the driveway.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cAnd we\u2019ll hammer you,\u201d Colin chimes in; \u201cyou\u2019re useless!\u201d<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> Recalling the damage to his shins following his more recent kick-abouts with his nephews, Justin retrieves an empty plastic bottle from the recycling bin, picks up the newly-sharpened spade, and walks to the fallow patch between the garage and the boundary wall. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cListen, you two,\u201d he growls, struggling to master that look. \u201cThe next time I play anything with you, I\u2019ll make the rules.\u201d He swings the spade, slicing the bottle in half. \u201cOkay?\u201d His glare follows the retreating boys all the way to the kitchen door. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> At about four o\u2019clock the brothers begin rowing over their Xbox game.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cBoys, go play outside; <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"><i>please<\/i><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\">!\u201d Brenda screams.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cJustin will have a game of football with you.\u201d Mam offers.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cI\u2019m going upstairs to read my book,\u201d Trevor mutters.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cGrandda, can I borrow a book, please?\u201d Colin splutters.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> On the Friday after Easter, Justin enters the office at lunchtime. As he is deciding how to deal with the pile of unwanted files that have found their way back to his desk, he hears the boss\u2019s summons from the inner office.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cAnd what time do you call this? Where were you all morning; well?\u201d He growls, and then blinks in surprise as Justin\u2019s face transforms into a grotesque mask.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cTuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday: three days,\u201d Justin says, sotto voce, raising a finger to represent each day as one might when explaining to a confused child, \u201cmultiplied by two, makes six days. Plus a half-day Monday and a half-day Friday, come to a total of seven days\u2026\u201d Silently, Justin continues to glare. The boss has gone deathly pale; his hands shake as he gulps from a glass of colourless liquid.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> \u201cOf course\u2026 whatever you say, Justin.\u201d Swallowing noisily, the boss gets to his feet and hitches his trousers a notch further up his ample girth. Carefully detouring around Justin, he opens his office door. \u201cThanks, Justin; thanks, again,\u201d he repeats, as Justin stalks back to his desk. After sorting the offending files into three bundles, he then plonks one on each amigo\u2019s desk. There isn\u2019t a sound in the office as Justin pauses at Liz\u2019s desk. His face expressionless, he leans towards her and, whatever he whispers, she responds with a bright smile; her ginger curls bobbing with each animated nod. Looking neither right nor left, Justin returns to his desk. <\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: Times New Roman, serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: medium;\"><span lang=\"en-IE\"> His concentration shattered by the surreal silence, Dep raises his head and scans the office, blinking repeatedly at the sight of all three amigos apparently totally immersed in their returned files.<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"font-weight: 400;\">From Listowel, Ireland, Neil Brosnan was first published in 2004. Since then, his short stories have appeared 100+ times in print and digital anthologies and magazines in Ireland, Britain, Europe, Australia, India, USA, South America, and Canada.<\/p>\n<p style=\"font-weight: 400;\">A Pushcart nominee, he has won\u00a0<em>The Bryan MacMahon<\/em>,\u00a0<em>The Maurice Walsh<\/em>,<em>\u00a0<\/em>(six times<em>)\u00a0<\/em>and\u00a0<em>The Ireland\u2019s Own<\/em>, (twice) short story awards. He has published two short story collections:\u00a0<em>\u2018Fresh Water &amp; other stories\u2019<\/em>\u00a0(Original Writing, 2010) and\u00a0<em>\u2018Neap Tide<\/em>\u00a0<em>&amp; other stories\u2019\u00a0<\/em>(New Binary Press, 2013)<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>\u2026 but Sunday night, I get a fright, when I think of Monday morning. 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