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Animal Picnic by Marijke Hillmann

Posted on October 11, 2013 by Every Writer

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Animal Picnic

by Marijke Hillmann

Kafue River, Zambia

My fear smells the fungus and dank moss along the river bank, the burning of charcoal and the sudden, sharp change of my own body odour.

My fear hears the changing rhythm of the gently lapping waves, my husband’s sharp intake of breath and our son’s anxious scream.

My fear sees Raksha, our German Shepherd Wannabe gliding towards us through the murky waters, the retrieved stick proudly clamped between her teeth. A few hundred meters behind, the yellow eyes of a large crocodile are rapidly closing in on her.

We desperately call out: “Raksha here”, wondering whether she will manage to swim the few meters which separate her from the river bank, whether she will obey our command or whether the croc will once more submerge before making a final lunge for its prey.

Panic, followed by survival instinct takes over – picking up our son we start running, shouting for the dog to follow us. How far and how fast does a croc move on land – does it have good eyesight – do we zigzag in between the trees? Every piece of advice by our fellow expatriates flashes through my mind and simply dissolves; I lean against a tree, my breath rasping in my heaving chest.

The leaves rustle behind me. I jump in fear: a wagging tail and trusty eyes, begging me to throw the stick into the river again.

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Marijke writes a monthly story for us. She write our segment Stories in Africa, and her stories will some day become a novel. For now please enjoy them, we are honored to have her work on our site. You can find more of her work here.

 

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